Hobbies and free time activities.
In our everyday life we have a lot of responsibilities and obligations. However, there are some activities that we really enjoy because we have the chance to have fun.
Watch the following video and provide your opinion (30-40 words) about your hobbies and free time activities in your life.
In our everyday life we have a lot of responsibilities and obligations. However, there are some activities that we really enjoy because we have the chance to have fun.
Watch the following video and provide your opinion (30-40 words) about your hobbies and free time activities in your life.
Starting date: August, 19th
Closing date: Sept, 2nd
Closing date: Sept, 2nd
Manuel Pizarro: My hobbies are sleep, eat, read and use my computer in my free time. Any days i do exercise and practice any sport, i like but some time i´m not practices because I´m not have time or I´m not have energy. My favorite activity es read good history of any type.(era por aca nomas verdad?)
ResponderBorrarDear Manuel,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: I; I am not practicing; I am not having. Do not use Spanish in your entry. There is an attempt to use complex structures, but you should use more connectors.
María Cornejo: My hobbies are bicycling around town, play guitar, paint pictures with oil. En my free time I like walking, travel to new places , share and have long conversations with my friends, and I like to cook .
ResponderBorrarDear María,
Borrarpay attention to the following items:In. Good use of vocabulary, but you shouls include more connectors in your entry.
Denisse Donoso: my hobbies are be cheerlear, dancing, bicycling and cooking. But in my free time I practice cheerleading, I make exercise, I play with my pets, I study, I sleep, or watch online series. Rarely I can make all the hobbies I want, because I do not have time, or by tiredness.
ResponderBorrarDear Denisse,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: are being a cheerleader. Use connectors to link your ideas. There a good use of vocabulary.
Vicente del Rio: My hobbies are sports, especially football and tennis play. I also like go to the stadium to go see the sports club Universidad Catolica. Another thing I like to do is party with my friends.
ResponderBorrarDear Vicente,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: like to go. Try to express more ideas and use connectors to link them.
Aracelly San Martin: My hobbies are sports, cook all kinds of food and dance. In my free time i like play the football, go to the cinema, go shopping and go to the park with my friends and my family.
ResponderBorrarDear Aracelly,
Borrarpay attention to the following items:I. Try to develop your ideas with more vocabulary and use connectors to link for a better organization.
Barbara Campos: My Hobbies are read novels, listen to music, and sports. In my free time I like see movies with my sister, go to run with my dog, go to the party with my friends.
ResponderBorrarDear Bárbara,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: do sport; like to see; go to parties. There is an attempt to use complex structures. Include connectors in your entry to link ideas.
Macarena Muñoz: My hobbies are watch tv shows and go out to the cinema, in my free time i like to go out with my boyfriend, also i love to read books and study in my house.
ResponderBorrarDear Macarena,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: I. Use corrects punctuation in your entry. Incorporate connectors to link your ideas.
Valentina Álvarez Cataldo: My hobbies are going to the cinema and watch new or old movies, dancing a lot and i also read different books that provide me with new knowledge. In my free time i like to hang out with my boyfriend or friends, i spend time with my family and i like to watch youtube videos as well.
ResponderBorrarDear Valentina,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: I; good use of vocabulary and connectors. Great job.
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ResponderBorrarAbel Renca:
ResponderBorrarMy hobbies are play the guitar, included classic and electric guitar, I write a lot of poems, and I love listen to music. Besides I compete with my friends in varied videogames, and sometimes I learn a bit of japanese.
Dear Abel,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: play guitar; love listening to. There is an attempt to use complex connectors. Good use of vocabulary. Good job.
My hobbies are read book of fiction, watch videos of kpop and movies of kids. In my free time study for univesity and listen to music, I like listen to music romantic and corean pop.
ResponderBorrarDear Emilia,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: fiction books; I study; like to; romantic music. Good use of vocabulary, but try to include connectors to link your ideas.
Sofía Cisternas:
ResponderBorrarmy hobbies are dancing, listening to music, eating and sleeping. In my free time I also like to sing, talk about life and go out with my friends and family.
In the weekend I like to go to scout, because is fun and I learn new things. About sports I enjoy playing volleybal but I don't practice anymore because I don't have time.
Dear Sofía,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: At the weekend. Good use of vocabulary. There is an attempt to use more complex structures. Great job.
Sergio Soto. I like to paint and to draw. In my free time I see movies with my family. I like to watch tv but I love listen to music, I like rock latino, jazz and pop. My hobbie is to cook.
ResponderBorrarDear Sergio,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: love listening to; there is an attempt to provide reasons, but you need to include connectors to link your ideas.
my hobbies are dancing, painting, listen to music, go to the cinema and playing with my pest. In my free time i go out with my family, and i go to the party with my friends.
ResponderBorrarDear Antonia,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: pet; "I". Try to use connectors to link your ideas and express more ideas.
Hugo Aliaga:
ResponderBorrarMy hobbies are playing computer games,listen to music especially electronic and playing voleiboll.In my free time i go to the cinema, go to the parties and use my skateboard.
Dear Hugo,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: "I"; go to parties. There is a attempt to describe ideas, but vocabulary seems to be simple. Include connectors in your entry to link ideas.
Amanda Carrasco: My hobbies are doing everything with my dog, in the summer I like swimming in the ocean with him and in the winter I like walking in the street of the place I am with him too.
ResponderBorrarDear Amanda,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: in the street of the place. Include connectors to link your ideas.
Ricardo Ferrada: My hobbies are sports (i like football), listen to music specially classic rock. In my free time i like see TV series with my family in my home.
ResponderBorrarDear Ricardo,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: "I"; like to see. Be careful with the number of words (30) you have less than that. 5
Álvaro Doñas: My hobbies are listening to music specilly Middle East while i read tarot although not very successful. I like to prepare cocktail at the weekend whit my Friends.
ResponderBorrarDear Alvaro,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: "I"; with. Use of capital letters. Be careful with the number of words (30) you have less than that. 5
my hobbies are soccer, table tennis, guitar, saxophone and especially bicicleta.En walk .in my free time I listen to music, play an instrument and share with my family
ResponderBorrarDear Ignacio,
Borrarpay attention to the following items: bicicleta; en. Be careful with the number of words (30) you have less than that. You need to use more vocabulary to express ideas. 5